good game but...
the game is really Good for being made for flash. good ambient, and sounds really make it good when come to make unsafe the player. and death scenes for the kid are really good to make the player take care more of himself.
Tought:
1) music get bit repetitive good from the start but make you feel a bit sleepy hear the same music over and over again
2) yes Noir games are good but you should consider about not set traps were are hard to see, well yeah traps are like that, but in games theyre at least some "noticeable" if the player are aware of their surrounding. because "instant death" traps can make player a bit frustrated and quit the game.
3) the run / walk thing can be a bit annoying. specially players with keyboard that just pressing more than 3 keys, keyboard dont respond and then you cant do some actions. specially players that dont like to feel a bit "slow" and use everytime Shift to run, give at least the option about toggle run / walk with shift instead pressing shift to run.
4) i dont know if this was a bug or its part of the game but after i died and was reading some things when i come back to restart where the part i died. the game itself dont make scrolling where i respawn luckely a spike kill me and scroll was fixed but now a church was where wasnt before.
and for last
5) this kind of game in noir make a good ambient as i said. but at least try to not hide the path that player need to take to go foward. when i was exiting the church and see there was 2 ropes and 1 trampoline i was trying to find the way where i can reach the ropes until i try to jump inside the church was the rope i need. i said this because not all the players are good trying to find paths and they at the end give up. if there must be a hidden path then there must be a reward on it. thats why its a hidden path. but paths that player need to follow to advace trought the level not. unless there is a puzzle on it.
otherwise game is really good. Keep up with the good work