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Reviews for "The Telescope"

nicely done

I love the style this is done in. It's very unique and colorful, and it really helps to tell the story. The music is interesting too. Overall I'd say you achieved what you were probably aiming for with this animation.

I enjoyed it, at least.

Gerkinman responds:

Enjoying it is what its all about in the end my friend.

Excellent

Great animation, great music, great colour. I found that really enjoyable

Gerkinman responds:

I love me some colors.

Ehhhhhh

I liked the first 2 minutes, but then the dialog became tiring. =/, you should try using real characters instead of shapes and circles, and 1/2 pt. perspective more with the backgrounds, and work on the script a lil more -this just seemed like a bunch of random shit allover the place for a few minutes and then it ended. Some of the animation was intresting and it did have an old school feel - but i feel like if you had done it more traditionally and worked on the story line the flash would have been better - but hey this is your piece of flash do what you will

Gerkinman responds:

It certainly is all rather flat looking, I blame my lack of skill, especially when drawing backgrounds. As for the script, thats hard to work on when there isn't one in the first place. It was all made up as I went albeit in storybord form during my lunch breaks at my previous jobs and then strait into flash. Certainly things for me to take into account before my net project :)

really amazing

love your style,
love the creativity,
and as said before, the music was fitting perferctly.
5,10
thanks and peace.

Gerkinman responds:

Thank you :)

wow

perfect animation, brilliant work and the music fits perfect!! keep up the good work!! :D

Gerkinman responds:

Thanks :)