Ehhhhhh
I liked the first 2 minutes, but then the dialog became tiring. =/, you should try using real characters instead of shapes and circles, and 1/2 pt. perspective more with the backgrounds, and work on the script a lil more -this just seemed like a bunch of random shit allover the place for a few minutes and then it ended. Some of the animation was intresting and it did have an old school feel - but i feel like if you had done it more traditionally and worked on the story line the flash would have been better - but hey this is your piece of flash do what you will