script > animation
animation was very lazy and simple. 2/5. Script was funny thought, so 4/5 for that. the timing was good atleast u had that buddy, so plus 1 for effort, and the fact that this actually made me laff
Reviews for "Wheel of Misery"
CyanSandwich responds:
Thanks. You're right about the animation :P
okay
those tacos for a month are NOT the real ones, for sure.
i would want the free tacos 2
lol
Could have been better...
The characters were a bit predictable I actually thought shawn would win, becuase...like its chicken..not tacos...
Anyway it could have been a little been more on edge, like real game shows, this felt really relaxed and not very game show like.
I expected more from the "Wheel of Misery", like idk... having to kill a puppy or wearing a 666 on a dress type of thing,... if you have a chance to redo it please do, becuase if you were trying to be funny, then you had a bad approach...
CyanSandwich responds:
I'm definitely not re-doing this :P
Whether it's funny or not is opinion. I thought I did a bad job of writing it, but a lot of the people here seem to think it was funny.
Sorry dude...
The artwork isn't too bad, I mean at least there's shading. The voice quality isn't too bad. But there's many things wrong with this. It's still enjoyable by a certain degree, but I just wanted to point it out. First of all, have you noticed there's a slight popping sound here and there? That usually comes from the mic, so no offense to the voice actor, but can you check on what you record more often? Second, why was there a white border on occasions? Seriously dude, you didn't even bother to check to see if some of the animation FITS? Good God man, that really ruins the animation. Speaking of which, the animation is pretty decent, but the detail was way too solid. The characters were fine, but the detail looks out of place compared to the characters. Oh yeah, and there's a small glitch. Sometimes, when I press play, for some reason, it cuts to the last half immediately. I don't know about you, but people really hate being spoiled on what's going on without knowing what went on in the beginning, although that only happened the third time I viewed this, so I really don't know if this happens on the first try. But, at least you admit that you rushed in the end, which explains why my expectations were not as great as they were supposed to be.
... Yeah, I give the SAME critique to almost EVERY review I give, but seriously man, it's obvious that more than just the ending was rushed. Dude, take your time!
CyanSandwich responds:
You do have a couple fair points there. The white border must've been some vCam glitch. It's not really a big enough deal for me to try and fix it now.
The play glitch I feel stupid about. I put it there so I could test later parts of the movie without having to watch the whole thing. It's fixed now.
But it's basically rushed a lot of the way because I was on a deadline.