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Reviews for "It's over, Marcus!"

Wtf.. Oh wait, haha!!

Started off a bit odd.. Wondering if you were encourging suicide, then it all made sense. :P Funny. Loved how you could see the motions of the wind as he was falling, so it looked semi realistic.

Only thing I noticed very choppy, I'd say only thing improving on is the motions of his legs when running off the cliff, and/or when free falling.

Other than that, Nicely done!!

Steinberg responds:

Yeah I'm not very good with frame by frame, specially walking cycles. But yeah, I will keep that In mind, I will put more effort into overall movements in my next animations. Thanks!

Why would you want to kill yourself ...

... when you have such FABULOUS hair?!?

Steinberg responds:

Haha, yah, that fabulous hair was really annoying to animate on every damn shot. Almost made me want to kill myself instead. I should have put more effort into character design. Oh well. Thanks for the 10! :)

nice one

now i dont want to die. youve saved me. :\

Steinberg responds:

Good, good! Make me proud.

Great flash

~~REVIEW~~
ok so this starts off slow with the loading page, not an issue, i do like your loading page as its something and a good funny looking character if i say so myself, so notbad there, so as the movie gets started, the character has a sorta {FRAME BY FRAME} also like the touch of some subtitles, this was played very well with some real sound/fx. and voices, and it showed real emotion from the character it was like a real movie, i also loved the differant Camera shots, so very nice job there, you gave it some {HUMOR} as he was falling, and ouch at the end i love that you just fade to black very nice touch, and another nice touch was the ending {MUSIC} i believe that was from {CURB YOUR ENTHUSIASIM} show? anyways great flash it was very good right from the start, glad i saw it and reviewed it ill add this one as my faves.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So on this one as to improve, its already great as is, but maybe as he is falling have a cloud of images of what he was thinking like the parashooting and all, just an idea though.

~~OVERALL~~
A great movie well deserved award, and very well made with emotion and humor

~X~

Steinberg responds:

Thanks a lot, I'm glad you liked it that much and faved it! I put a lot of effort into it and appreciate your time into writing this great review. Yeah the song is from Curb Your Enthusiasm, I had it laying around my hard drive and noticed it would be a nice touch. Thanks again for the great review!

I get where you were trying to go

You don't understand the mind of s suicidal person, however.

Great effort in the flash quality.

Steinberg responds:

Thanks!