Reviews for What's Going On Here?

[SergeantLuke]

Great animation, passable writing

Alright, now I love the very fluid animation, the vibrant colors, and the inherently funny character designs (anything with large noses is automatically amusing, if you ask me). However, the whole "idiot misunderstands the obvious" comedy plot has been way over done by this point - see: every single episode of Inspector Gadget and Get Smart - and this honestly isn't a particularly funny example of the cliche, either.

I've gotta love the last line, though. "Shit."

MyKindOfFlash responds:

Thank you for your review! Joshua Tomar delivered that closing line perfectly I felt. And I understand what you're saying, I will take on board your criticisms in future. This is just a little gag I felt the impulse to animate, I haven't really made anything over 1.5 minutes yet but hope to make some longer, more thought out Flashes soon. Thanks again.

[SurrealStage]

Well done!

Your character animation has transformed from top-notch to bringing the notch up another level. I really like the subtle squiggle in the character outlines that keep the movie from feeling static at all. Great variety of shots, excellent voice work by Mr. Tomar, and a basic yet effective gag. Ready to see where your next film sets the bar!

MyKindOfFlash responds:

Thanks for noticing that! I feel it separates the characters from the background a tad and brings them to life that little bit more. Appreciate the review, Christopher. Congratulations on Pico's Destiny making front page too!

[crazydan05]

Mime talk?

You'd think as soon as he said something that the guy would've realize he wasn't a mime. What about the face makeup? What about the gloves?

HE'S NOT A MIME AT ALL!

I think that this could've been funnier to be honest, but the animation was great and I can tell alot of work was put into it so 4/5 from me.

MyKindOfFlash responds:

Thanks you. I appreciate the honesty. I thought it'd be funny if he was so caught up in the excitement that he didn't realise 'til last minute.

[joychantel]

neat

This looks like something I would see on t.v.! Good Job!

MyKindOfFlash responds:

Oh wow, thanks for that comment! Much appreciated!

[Freax161]

Great,

I love it!

MyKindOfFlash responds:

I love you! Let's get married. Now.