Descent
It seemed rushed, take more time and try to put a bit more detail into the story. I thought it was alright for a first try though.
Reviews for "Pokemon Adventure Ep. 1"
Not bad.
I think it would be much more exciting if you actually did the battle screens when they pokebattle.
Clozal responds:
thx :)
I thought the battle scene was a bit dull and basic but... maybe your right
.... I will try my best to fit one in for you!