Make scene 2!
Wow. I actually liked it.
Reviews for "Construction Men (Scene1)"
That guy's review is long.
Pico was wearing a sad face necalace.
Pretty sweet
Very stylistic and great scripting and voice acting. Ended kinda abruptly though, seems like the start of something bigger. As a concept it's great and you pulled it off well so i look forward to part 2!
Nothing short of a short
Even though there is no actual animation here, it was simple and smooth. Since the cartoon style you were going with doesn't really need that much animation in the first place.
Anyway
The script was decent. Though it was just made up of Pico's angst, and Chuck's(goggles guy) douche bag antics. Particularly the only two characters that are worth mentioning here.
The voice acting was awesome. Crisp, clear and convincing enough.
so far there's no interesting development here yet...but it has piqued my interest so I hope scene 2 would'nt be disappointing.
Ockeroid responds:
Hopefully won't disappoint!
pico
where the fuck is my girder! nice