very good, and very fluent.
very good, aand very fluent animation, is was very well-done, and the story was REALLY FUN!
epic!
Reviews for "Portal Hoppin'"
Amazing
What amazing style and pacing!
Haha!!
Awesome! Definitely worthy of frontpage for a long time to come. The pacing was done really well imo, there was always something to laugh about but it didn't scramble your brain either. I know that sounds trivial but there are a lot of flashes that suffer from being way too slow, or so fast you have no idea what happened.
Now I'm no super NG expert when it comes to the staff, but you did a good job of making understandable (and most importantly, not too base) jokes about them. Keeping Johnny Utah's arm like that the whole time? Brilliant. I also laughed pretty darn hard at "IN B4 LUIS!". Stuff like that you don't even need a ton of context for, I know who Stamper is and I've seen Luis here and there, the mind just fills in the blanks for the rest.
It was entertaining
Voices were acted out well
Awesome concept
Well, the way this turned out was funnier than I expected. Some great writing and awesome voices, combined with the fact that you've drawn the guys in such a way that they're recognisable, yet instantly lampooned.
As far as the voices were concerned, I'd have done a minor tweak / swap. liljim is the Englishman, so surely he should have had the posh, snobby voice that you gave to Wade and given him something deeper, yet still nerdy and indicative of someone obsessed with photography and flashlights.
I think that as a writer, judging by FBIpolux' post from the NG Office on Pico Day itself, there should have been a cut-scene at the end, when it cuts back to NGHQ and Mike looks around from his computer, sees everyone with bandages and so forth, before commenting "What the hell happened to you?"
Awesome stuff, please give us a sequel, because they're going to have to rebuild.
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