Excellent writing.
I must say, I like your style.
It really fits Paper Mario and I thought it was funny.
The animation is most entertaining too. Very neat and fluent. Nothin over the top.
However, if you rate this "E" as in Everyone, keep the swearing away. lol
I hope, you do more.
Oh haha I completely forgot about the swearing. I've never been a fan of animating huge fight scenes, if the situation doesn't call for it. Thanks for the review!
i love this story! is this a continuing series?
YA! pokemon tower defence
Could use some work
It's funny, for sure. That "I WILL DEVOUR YOUR SKULL" line really cracked me up, since it was such a good random threat. But you misspelled a few words, like "chef" as "chief", "thief" as "theif", and you messed up your "too"s and your "to"s. Too is like too much, and to is more like I'm going to.
But you should definitely continue this, it could be really great!
Ahhh no way. I thought for sure I had fixed all of the spelling errors. In past movies I've made there wasn't really any plot, it was mostly random gags haha, I guess that still shows in my later works.
Cool.
Wow, that was pretty good. I enjoyed it alot and hope you bring some more good stuff in. If this was your first, then your off to a great start, but if this is a later one, then keep it up! I hope alot of people will enjoy this and keep up the awesome work.