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Not a trance man I am, but you participated in the MAC6 and I'm reviewing them all :)
Same issues I always have with the genre, same chords repeating over and over again, bland beat, blah blah blah - that won't make you any wiser because it's all personal preference.
However, I can say that the build-up of the piece seems flawed to me. It seems to consist of breaks for 70%. I don't know if 'breaks' is the accurate word, but I mean that it takes a lot of time to get into full gear, and when it's finally at it's peak it breaks down way too soon and starts slowly building up again.
On the other hand, there's a lot of FX, panning stuff and whatnot to enjoy so I'm sure it will get a lot of appreciation (as I can already tell by the downloads!).
Good luck on your music, and if you're interested, check mine some time!