great
crazy and surprisingly funny , i did not expect that ... also the feeling of a dream is here too , i like this .
great
crazy and surprisingly funny , i did not expect that ... also the feeling of a dream is here too , i like this .
Great job, but...
...you need to go deeper.
Cool story but...
...you need to go deeper.
Very fluid!
Loved it - congrats on the front page - pretty decent collab!!
i got a bit of a chuckle out of it
nothing much though. i really enjoyed it. the concept of the idea of being in a dream world it has limitless potential. i would have wished that more people could have helped out with the collab and made it longer, but as it is it was nice short and sweet.
Thanks! You have a good point.