Reviews for Final Mansion

[RainingBullets]

Great, but with its share of faults

I don't mind the senseless killing, it's something that has stuck with stick figure animations since the beginning. The background was really good, perhaps too good. Compared to the action going on in the screen, I constantly found myself paying attention to the background rather than the action going on screen. The animation was very fluid, maybe also too fluid. The punches and the kicks looked as if they didn't have a lot of power, because when they threw those punches or kicks they were too smooth. All in all, I think you need some more practice in animating fights.

[XwaynecoltX]

Very impressive

~~REVIEW~~
nice start to this especially the {PRE-LOADER} menu page very slick and nice looking, the loading time tended to take awhile, but it was worth the wait, also nice touch with all the extras of screens and all the little extras those things really make it much better so props to you for that stuff, and now for the actual flash, wow this was very impressive especially with the fast paced action and great music that fits very well, the graphics was very smooth and sharp the battles and all the differant little weapons and such was great, it seemed to all come together verywelldone on this, i will have to checkout more of your work , this was very impressive and i was very pleased. keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
i think this was awsome it would be nice to have some user interactivity in it.

~~OVERALL~~
fun flash very good visual effects.

~X~

[SoulsCollector]

i would like this a game though

well the move some what little rough, not in my taste of stick fight movie. but it still good :)

[howchildish]

Liked it, but could have done better.

You had a lot of stuff down in this one, but there somethings that you could have done to improve it.
You didn't really use the environment a lot, i like how he was drag down by a zombie and then rise up again, but that was it, it seemed like for the most part it was just the guy shooting people that are running directly infront of the gun instead of actually fighting the main character. Theres a lot of objects in the environment that the stick figure could have used.
Maybe use some close ups and slow mos at the right time to emphasize the action. The flow seemed slow at times and could use a little more tweak in pacing to improve the intensity of the fight.
I really liked the second part where there's this whole shift in setting and angle changes. and the fight with the demon is definitely the highlight of the whole short. I would say though that the demon should look more distinctive than the other enemies. His look is very similar to the other enemies, which didn't show how strong he is.
All in all, it's very good and i liked it. Can't wait to see your stuff in the future.

[DaftArtifex]

Not bad.

Animation could of been a lot better.

Well presented and decent music.

IaMI2002 responds:

Thanks, will do better next time. :D.