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well this was friggin nice
i agree with phsychopath
Reviews for "MOOLT - Computer Love"
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its always the wives freakin cleanin rite guyz?XD nah, jus' kiddin, i actually agree with phsychopath.
This wasn't all that funny.
To be honest, these interview reality TV show styled cartoons you've been making for the past year were funny at first, but now they've become annoying even to the extent of becoming obnoxious.
Here's my point; your characters used to do stuff; get involved in boxing matches; become slobbish Ninjas of legend; mow each other down with horses while paying homage to Mel Gibson flicks, tell the story about The Liar and perform rap songs about food product.
Now, all they ever do is bitch to each other or bitch to the audience about how prima/seconda sucks ass while shifting around on the screen and maybe move their arms on occasion.
I know that dialogue is important in comedy and can make for good or even great jokes but the banter here isn't funny. There's no set up for a joke, the punch line is so weak it requires me to retrace the writing to figure out what it was and above all the joke itself was wooden.
The reason for this is it wouldn't be so bad if the context of why they're being so offensive and defensive wasn't "she disassembled his computer". I don't think that warrants a "You did it asshole" followed by "Go fuck yourself" argument. If it had escalated to that point gradually from the ground up, it might have been funny. The reason why it isn't funny is because they jump headfirst to that level of immaturity in the argument from the very beginning and it had no where to go so as a result, it went virtually no where.
The topic is funny; she's a clean freak who disassembled his PC while he took a shit because she's so overzealous and obsessive over being clean that she'll go to extreme lengths to be clean. But the dialogue is hell; a bland, uninteresting, stressful and generic flame war that ends up going nowhere only to prove that Harut was right about everything; the result; the wife looks touchy and emotionally defensive over something that was entirely her fault = not funny. The dialogue might have worked if her defensive argument wasn't so generic; lines like "Maybe you did it", "Why do you blame me for everything?", "Stop blaming me for everything", "I hate you" and "Shut up", don't cut it for me.
The way I see it, it's just stressful and filled with unwarranted hate; an argument that goes nowhere. Watching characters yell and argue with each other shouldn't make me feel like I'm the one getting yelled at, but I do; bad things happening to people in general isn't funny, it's who it's happening to that makes it funny.
The mother in the series is funny because she's dense; watching her come up with logical folly's and jump to half baked conclusions with deep, deep misconceptions is what makes her funny. Watching her yell at Harut using general argument tactics and Ad hominems, however, isn't funny, mainly because we're not getting to see her flawed, dumbass logic but rather just her issuing fourth a generic flame war. Sure, the topic of why she's being yelled at is funny, but the dialogue that presents and supports the topic isn't. That's why this isn't funny; what banter is supposed to be is clever, good humoured and typically spontaneous dialogue. But this is not clever nor is it good humoured. It's weak, stressful yelling; I don't feel like I want to continue watching, I feel like I wanna get as far away from this as possible, save for the artwork.
About your artwork, although it's usually always good in it's simplicity I noticed an error; it appears as though that you copy/pasted the couch Harut's wife is sitting on, on top of itself. In other words; I'm seeing two couch's with one on top of the other when there's supposed to be only one, the one underneath is on a slightly lower elevation and more to the left than the one on top. I noticed that the error ceases as the argument "escalates" further, but it still occurs in the former half of the movie.
I don't mean to tell you what to do with your time, or to tell you not to do what you want with it, that's entirely up to you. But I really wish I could see the conclusion to Neenja already; I've been waiting for it for 4 years.
Hysterical
These are great ^^ can't wait for the next one
because the house is cleaner that way!
very nicely done! i dig.