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Reviews for "Villainy - P.I. #1"

yeah

Amazing use of expressions! love it

Nice

A good and sweet animations. It goes smooth and the sound is very nice done! Hope to see more soon!

Nice

Really cool animation. I dig the mouth shapes, and the head gestures. Pretty funny writing too. Kudos.

Very funny

It started out great but then you just dragged out the same joke for the whole thing. It was funny when he said attempted involuntary manslaughter and attempted indecent exposure, but you should've just left it at that. Some people might have missed the joke, but that's the way it is with the best stuff.

Instead you just milked it for more than it was worth, and it stopped being funny. It's like you were trying to make sure people got it or something. It made it look like you have no material and wanted to turn one joke into several, in turn making you look like a poor comedic writer. I think you can come up with more stuff than that.

DonkeysBazooka responds:

i feel stupid for having to ask, but did you intentionally drag your review out and repeat the same thing a hundred times just to be ironic? if your review was a joke, im sorry for not getting it. i'm a big tard.

if it wasn't, then thank you for the constructive criticism

tĂȘte

The face animation is just perfect