Not bad.....
I like your style of drawing but the words are a little hard to read although I did relize you where trying to match the font to your own art.
The story was kinda "wArPeD" which is fab as I have a "WaRpEd" sence of humour but it got boring as it went along.
For your next episode please keep your art the same but think about the story a little longer, I know you can bring something crazy to our dull lives.
Welldone :)