Potential
Id say that with piss jokes, there are always going to be bits you miss, but the secondary squirt of pee after the main flow has stopped would ahve just capped off the gag there.
Plus potentially some sort of reaction from the dude, other than just facial expressions. The animation was good, the sounds a little off, due to echoing effects and while this piece is funny, it lacked the killer delivery that other pieces have. Work a little on them and I'm sure you can go far, getting yourself up there, with the cream of the crop.
Perhaps he needed to deploy an actual portal, or maybe just a glow coming from off screen would have helped the delivery? It's just a few minor things that would be needed and they could be used to such devastating effect. Some sort of short musical jungle as well might have been useful for the intro.
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