A lot of effort in there
I'm gonna be honest. You didn't plan your animation at all, did you? I mean, i like when there's a lot of random stuff happening, it's really spontaneous, but it didn't fit the claymotion you made. In my point of view, you should make a better planned video and even pay more attention to the character poses and movement they are going to make, sometimes i can't predict what the characters are gonna do, i mean there's no anticipation involved. You put a lot of effort in your animation, but honestly it wasn't good... it didn't got my attention and i'm not gonna remember it tomorrow!
Keep it up, you've got skills, patience and you really stick to your work until the end, which is awesome and not many people do these days.