good flash
It was a very good flash. But you didn't site a source and seeing that flash below its obvious you've seen it and it inspired you. That's fine, just site it. also the ending with the furries was just sad. it honestly was a very good flash. The furries just ruined it. Could you have at least used the one you used at the very end last second? that was at least mildly frightening
Pretty entertaining
The animation and suspense were great. The setup is good, though I'm not sure why it's so similar to grickle's "The Hidden People" on youtube, an animation that some are now calling "The Original Northern Incident." It could just be a coincidence but if it wasn't, it would be nice to acknowledge it and give the guy credit.
Two points:
- More dialogue (or I guess in this case monologue). The speech was good but could have been used more to develop the guy's character.
- The ending: the fact that they were furries just doesn't quite fit with the rest of it, in my opinion. It is kind of funny, but once I saw them I wondered a couple things: how did they slice King in half? How did they keep knocking on the door and seemingly vanish right after? I mean, it's OK that they're furries for comedic reasons I guess, but the viewer is lead to think it's some kind of ghostly, camouflaged, menacing unknown. I get that the furries are a kind of ironic, funny twist, but it winds up being a bit of a letdown.
Good effort, great animation.
7/10
Northern Incident
Furries?
And why are you sorry for this cartoon?
It's great work!
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That was really......... something else
Hmm
Honestly the work put into this is astounding. Just by your sheer effort i felt like making my first review in a long time to tell you to keep it up. The soundtrack and sound editing were very nice, and your animation is pretty great in comparison to a lot artists on here, so nothing to complain about there. In all the quality of it was great. However, i felt myself a little at odds with the ending, and didn't know whether to take you seriously or not. So the story needed some work, but this is like an "Avatar" like movie, where it looks and feels great, but the story doesn't quite make it. But really, keep it up. You'll find that good story and tell it like a flash champion.