hahhahahaha this is funny
Reviews for "Incredibly Gory Valentime"
1 Heart Beated Many hearts
you just went too far dude
Well, eh.
Since getting into creepypasta myself and noticing I am bad*** for starting to smile my creepy smile when watching most of them, this seems to fit my mindstate pretty well.
- Art/animation... well, guy's hearts getting ripped out was a loop and not much animation in there anyway. Artwork... hm, well, I didn't notice too many details in the room, except the "cake is a lie". But well, I think you already said you just whipped this up for Valentine?
- Humor... well, again, it is there, but for some reason doesn't work to me. Odd, considering I laugh when someone tore another fellow's intestine out and used it as a scarf. Huh.
- Awfully romantic... in the world of madness anyway. Good job!
Something I noticed:
- Again, here music from credits loops when replaying. It's not big, but still a flaw.
I also find it odd how guys inside the room don't freak out seeing dead guys in front of them. But then again I am guessing *looks at the faces* you took them all from Wal-Mart.
Was going to give this a 3/5, but considering I should categorize this as a "short", it gets 4/5.
4/5, 7/10
Rapheus responds:
Art: I actually made this a year or two before I uploaded it, hence the poorer animation.
Humor: ... Intestines as scarf? ...Good idea, mate.
Dang, I really need to test the looping music more...
Why yes, I used a pied piper routine to lure all these inebriated saps from good 'ol WallyWorld.
Thanks again, good buddy!
u killed yourself?!
wtf!?
Rapheus responds:
It happens. I got better though.