Nice stuff
I'd say its more techno then industrial, but Its really both
+ like the simple intro because of the nice instrument choice.
+ you build it into something good.
- as stated in some of the earlier reviews, its a simple beat chord that was masked up. this isn't always a bad thing though, take dimrain47 for example, all his stuff is simple, he just managed to pull off cool beat variations and incorperated different beats.
+ there were some cool breaks from the main beat.
+ there were times when you had a few cool beats layered into the song.
- If you knew the beat was as simple as it is, you should have made it shorter to lessen the effect of it being repeditive.
Overall its really great though