I offically love Abe's new hairdoo
Really good, didn't like how the only sound there was was the music, needed more sound effects then it'd be perfect.
Reviews for "Hair Affair"
WalkingShrub responds:
I did do a version with sfx, but it didn't seem to work as well. Thanks for the input and the review though!
cool
I like it, nice detail put into the art too.
WalkingShrub responds:
Thank you!
Odd.
A decent silent short. Great work on condensing the story to a quick, 30 second tale. You kept it to the bare minimums of what needed to be told as far as story progression and it stopped the animation becoming boring.
The animation was alright. A little bit off, but then again you chose some interesting and difficult angles to animate, so good work on that half. Some of the character outlines seemed a bit thick and harsh in comparison to the backgrounds they were in, but that wasn't a huge problem.
All in all it was fun to watch, a short bite of entertainment that wasn't over the top. Good job.
WalkingShrub responds:
Thanks for the great review! I'm glad you're the first person to call it silent, as most people I know just call it "without dialogue."
liked it
told a nice story, like the big hair world theme,
but was it night when he got tossed out the window?
WalkingShrub responds:
No, I originally had the black and white reversed, but then I realized not only did it look better this way, but the sun shouldn't be black.