lol wut?
he stayed in the forest for **years**... its buging me for some reasons..
oh well
5 for effort.
Reviews for "Friendship."
Explain movie, EXPLAIN!
Um wtf? Let me get this straight the kid left his campin buddy and befriended a raven with a broken wing and got killed for it in the end, nice irony I guess but I have a bunch of questions left unanswered and even with the movies summary in the description this movie doesnt make any sense. Why did camper asshole leave his campin buddy, and for that matter what happened to the other camper? Why did the forest catch on fire, and why did the raven go psychotic?
As a previous reviewer said the story is all over the place, I don't know how you guys expected us to get the story of this flash unless the point was to fill in the plotholes ourselves, which as you can tell from reviews wasn't a good idea. I mean decent animation and visuals alone aint enough, you guys need more animation put into making this movie understandable to the audience instead only focusing on the scenes, then your blood, sweat, tears and handwork will be a lot more appreciative that way.
pros:
decent animation
attempts a "boy and his raven story"
cons:
movie is hardly possible to follow, wouldve been better if you guys just stuck with a script instead of trying to make the movie a case for Sherlock Holmes.
2/5
Entertaining
I really enjoyed the story, it was beautiful in a way.
I got quite disappointed with the animation but considiring the 48 hours limit it was ok, the music was very fitting, the title is not much fitting though.
One thing that really bothered me was the boy's t-shit, it looked too modern for a scout boy, I assumed that they were from a "legend era" so that t-shit was kinda out of place.
About the bird's scythe: it looked more like a tentacle than a scythe, it looked too much like something organic rather than made of metal (or was the scythe actually part of the demon's body?).
P.S: I did notice the lots of effort into this though, keep up the nice work.
funkycaveman responds:
The scouts shirt is similar to the ones we have here in the UK, also all 3 of the team members were scouts. We based it off that. The scythe was part of the bird. Thanks for the review!
K, really good. But could've been better
I think that for the time given you guys did an excellent job. A few things could have been done better tho. The transitions between scenes were drawn out a few times, they could've have been a little bit smoother. The main character could have been a little bit less robotic with more than just two face expressions. The ending was really confusing, I guess it was supposed to be a demon or something? And why did he kill the boy? All in all you guys did an awesome job, keep up the good work.
P.S. I thought that it was really cool that you could see different artists styles throughout.
funkycaveman responds:
Thanks for the review. The bird was a demon and of course demons kill people. We did try to make each persons art obvious, we didn't want everything merging into one big mess.
nice :D
oh, sorry, but my english is so bad, i´m Chilean, and I will write this in spanish, use google tranlator pls xD. "me gusto mucho tu historia, e igual me senti algo identificado porque yo tengo un pajaro que encontre en condiciones similares, bueno, adios y buen trabajo" :D
funkycaveman responds:
Gracias por tu opinión.