Brilliant!
Excellent - what made it for me was the little twist on the stereotypical hero. I look forward to seeing more.
As for the pace - I thought it was almost spot on. Enough delay for tension building, without so much it felt unedited. You don't have to pander to the short attention span if you don't want to! Keep up the good work!
hahah nice XD
"that train should have killed me"
More!
Wonderful opening btw.
Nice Story
I like the art and story.
The only thing I would suggest you is to not have so much scenes that have silence and no movement, it kinda gets annoying sometimes.
Great animation, anyway!
good story
good story. try to put more effort into animation. Without good animation the viewer can lose allot. I see you having a strong video making career on newgrounds