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Oh t'was funny tough, know what? Subtitles man, subtiteles ¬¬....
Reviews for "-Scene Of The Crime-"
RidenerDesign responds:
I thought about it at one point. Didn't think it was completely necessary. I can add them later though if I want.
animation: solid. writing: not really...
Your animation skills are pretty good. The quality's pretty clear and crisp, and it's not choppy. But I think the writing for this flash is pretty weak, and that's fine if that's not what you're focusing on - but this wasn't very funny. It's not an original joke, and it wasn't all that effective. If you worked on the dialogue more, I'm sure this would have been a better flash.
lawl
Nice, pretty accurate to, cops suck at their job the older they get. Funny stuff man I liked the style nice short keep it up.
RidenerDesign responds:
Finally, someone who gets it!
Could be better
I think it could work as a spoof of crime drama cliche's, but the voice acting isn't all that good. I like that the actors were at least subtle in there performances whereas the actors of most so-called "parodies" think that to be funny you have to be as loud and/or stupid as possible, but these guys were just a bit too subtle, and by that I mean it sounds like they really don't give a shit about what they're doing. :/
Also, the joke at the end was very much like a bad sitcom--too fucking predictable.
Great first attempt
I think some parts of the animation could use a little work. The pauses in the conversation are unrealistically long. But this is a seriously good first attempt.