You have got talent.
Things you did well:
-Awesome art style(I cant believe its your first one ^_^)
-Sound and Music quality suprised me!
-For first time it really suprised me nobody
has got such great first movies. How old are you?
Things you need to add in the future:
- A preloader you can get here ( http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/p reloaders/ )
-More music or voice acting because its not so cool to hear nothing
-Oh yeah and voice acting i already mentioned.
But actually i loved to see more from you.