Pretty good
The art looks nice. it feels good to have some fresh wind into the flash industry.
You should work on your sound clips and maybe find some recording material for your voices.
For what's about art, eyes need to be worked on, no one would wear shorts in winter.
I may look mean but those are constructive! Keep on posting and improving ^^
You have got talent.
Things you did well:
-Awesome art style(I cant believe its your first one ^_^)
-Sound and Music quality suprised me!
-For first time it really suprised me nobody
has got such great first movies. How old are you?
Things you need to add in the future:
- A preloader you can get here ( http://www.newgrounds.com/downloads/p reloaders/ )
-More music or voice acting because its not so cool to hear nothing
-Oh yeah and voice acting i already mentioned.
But actually i loved to see more from you.