This was a complete failure
It would be easier to explain what was good about this flash more than the latter of what was wrong with it. The animation was awful, the voice acting made Jon sound like Barney, and the backgrounds and scenery looked like they were drawn by a five-year old! This was an absolute failure I believe. Hopefully next time you can draw and voice act better. Get some friends to help you out, if you have any after this abortion.