not good man
So many peeps try to upload stuff they did real fast but it gets blamed. Learn how to draw characters, learn the 12 principles of animation, learn about movie clips so you can organize your layers/ If you really like flash, then dive in bro
Your going to need a 4th try
You messed up in some *a lot* of areas, so im going to give you some helpful critizism-
1.Really short...you need to make this longer
2.The music is really unfitting and noisy. It hurts my ears, and is horrible.
3.What the heck is going on when the guy gets cut in half? It showed a white blob with a red line in it...how random...I didn't know what the hell was going on
4.The music, again. I just have to say it again because it spammed my computer
5.The names move by too fast...
6.Put more effort into making animation. That was almost the worst thing I ever saw.
Im giving you 1 star, and thats being nice.
Im going to respond to all:
First thanks for the criticism, now the answers:
1 . I agree with you, I'm working in it
2. I downloaded lots of musics from the audio portal but non of them worked on my flash, I used the only thing that worked
3. It's supposed to be the vult of the ninja and the red is supposed to be the sword cutting
4. I already answer that and also, I don't like it
5. I agree, I was seeing the flash in a different FPS rate but by mistake I've put it to fast, oh well!
6. Oh well, im still learning, but i think that's definitely best than the last one
Dude, if you want it to not loop involuntarily...
Get the NG preloader and follow the instructions.