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Reviews for "mario world pivot 1"

you worked hard on it

but finding a technique to stick with should be the 1st thing on your list

Ehh...

Not a bad first attempt. Could've done with some work but it's not completely horrible for a first flash. Just keep working on it and you could, someday, become a great flash maker, but for now, develop your flash making skills and keep practicing. Criticism aside, this is an interesting idea but I don't see too much Pivot unless it was you made this with Pivot first.

needs work

I understand its your first flash, but maybe try other animation methods. keep workin at it.

ok...

this really sucks though it is your first try. Sorry bro feel the truth

spongebb0704 responds:

SORRY GOD DAMN PEOPLE

loads of room for improvement...

Not bad I guess. 2, because I do not know what is happening in the scene. And what about the glitchy trail they leave behind when they move? Sprites aren't fluid...At least u included a play, pause, and stop button, something I didn't do on my first, lol.

spongebb0704 responds:

Thanks brother i was 8 years old