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Reviews for "~Play~"

Bravo.

You have very well respected the matter of what needs to go on into a friendship, although I do see this as not your necessity for a goal. It kind of breaks my heart, to be quite honest, as the entire thing just shows how much of a pity my life, your life, hell, probably everyone's life is until they actually try to go out and enjoy their lives and live for the moment with friends and family. This just shows how much of a charming aspect the theme is.

Although I am sincerely touched by the scene of heartfelt companionship, I do believe it is in order for me to say that this could you some work. The whole scene of the woods they are running around in, chasing after each other, just looks to be very well pieces of cardboard cutouts that you could buy off any local market that happens to have some for sale on Christmas (give give give, get get get). It's too much of a blur at times that it puts too much of an unbalanced contrast between the characters and what environment they're interacting in. A little avant-garde, perhaps? The trees are basically looking like they have no clutch on a ground-based reality; a 3-D ratio. The background is looking like it's just there to be a pretty little thing.

Also, you left out something (although easily fixed by just right-clicking and pressing play in the bar): a replay button once the movie is finished (for that second-time over audience). Perhaps you left it out just for the purpose of it being a project movie? I don't know. But it's still a matter to be delt with.

Bravo, a second time through. Such a wonderful masterpiece you have commited to this proud community and all the wonderfuly things going on around you. I look forward to seeing what's in store for your next movie.

Cheers.

RiverJordan responds:

Hey lil man! That was an awesome review :)

Didn't realize that play issue, I'll fix that!

Also, as you were mentioning the whole living in the moment, pity peoples lives thing. You should go watch the movie "The Secret", It changed my life, and now every day is better than the last, everything is perfect!

:D

Lol...

freeze frame ending x'D

RiverJordan responds:

I had to make it as epic as possible!

twenty megs?!

Great animation, music, style...etc. Now... why is it 20 MB?! It's barely even 5min long...

Might wanna take a look at that, but otherwise, great!

RiverJordan responds:

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Love it

Love the art, concept and feel. It certainly has a Brackenwood-esque charm to it, and I'd love to see more animations in this style, as it's unique and very fun to look at. Can't wait for another!

Nice Job

Very cute