Interesting...
...Why would you spend such an absurd amount of time animating a story of such crappy quality? It's clear you spent a lot of time on this, but was there any point that you were considering doing this kind of thing professionally?
Then what? You'd link to "Phobotech" and then they'd see an obscure video game parody, a parody on a movie that won't make sense unless they've seen Watchmen, and even then, it's vaguely but uncomfortably gay. Dick Neck which features a guy getting sucked off. Threepio which was uncomfortable and gay. The one time you didn't do anything gay, the story is a piece of shit.
I mean, what the hell man!? I don't mean to be rude, but I signed up specifically to tell you: You've got talent. Get your head out of your ass and do something worth while!
...Or are you just going to waste your time making another parody? Like Newgrounds could really use that right now...
Props on using the Audio Portal to your full advantage, I'm sure those guys appreciate the extra exposure. Congrats on your first weekly award. Chill out on recommending this thing to the Doom collection, I'm sure it'll find it's way there eventually. The voice-overs were pretty well done. Music was imbalanced near the end...hell, it's pretty clear all around you rushed through this thing at a couple of points. I'd be interested in seeing the original storyboard to see how it compares, lol :P
But dude, try to do some original work in the future...ye ass. Good art, good voices, good musical selection, work on balancing the volume, quite rushing things, quit making parodies, quit giving untalented trash distinction. Voted 3.