Good work!
pros...
unique art (colors, lighting, BGs, lining)
lively voice overs (nice effects too)
pretty cool storyline (loved how it led into the fight right away, the fast pace of the story keeps the interest going)
great animation (rain, lip syncing, shadow effects)
cons...
the characters personally could use a little more style, its almost like a wide version of bevis and butthead
I liked the VO's but to improve them, maybe have the actors get into a cartoon character so the voice doesn't sound so human
Everyone loves action and fast animations, wouldn't mind seeing some ninja type stuff going on
Great job!!!! Overall, this is pretty impressive and I'm sure it was a lot of hard work. Keep it up.