That twist ending was absolutely brilliant. I really liked the use of the sound effects, and I loved Ziggy's voice. That laugh was genius XD. Good luck with the contest, I think you have a good chance! :)
Reviews for "My First Time Being A Hero"
KirbzVA responds:
Thank you! I really enjoy doing darker stories and figured this would be perfect to do a dual ending type thing. Glad you enjoyed the story :)
That was great, man!
Loved the contrast between characters!
Good plot.
Also felt it didn't drag on for too long, nor was it too short.
KirbzVA responds:
Thank you for the kind words :) I wanted to approach the theme using two different perspectives, depending on the character, so I hope you enjoyed!