Touching
A great animation, but I have to agree with some of the others on issues such as the anime style used on the characters and the weird shadows over the characters' eyes. I checked out your dA page and you CAN draw eyes so why not actually do so instead of the strange and distracting band of darkness over half their faces?
However, I still like your work very much. I personally found the music fitting to the animation and shot 25 was especially emotional. Overall, the concept and animation were splendid; this is a touching piece of work.