Potential
Hey man,
Its really cool you tried all these different artist approaches. Obviously it shows it's your first flash, but it shows a lot of potential. Im glad you got the balls to try these cool stylised colours and stuff. Just keep on it, matey and i bet you'll be cracking out some deadly stuff
A great start
This was a pretty interesting piece. And for a first flash, it has it's merits. It excites me to see someone with a good sense of style. Looks like you blended noir with western here, which is a great combination. My only gripe is that it sort of ended before it began. I really would like to see more.
I see you improving quickly and I can't wait to see what you do next. Good work.
P.S. Be proud that your first flash made front page. That's a HUGE accomplishment.
enjoyable
Really good for a first flash, i especially enjoy the detail you put in to the hair and facial hair of the shadowed characters.
Good work!
I really enjoyed this movie. A good western tale is always good in my book and this flash stayed true to most western themes. The animation was good though some work with the mouths and lip-syncing it would go along way. The voice acting was great and well dramatized and the music was fitting for each scene as well. The story seemed good but the ending needs work. The shootout is to be expected but it needs more; the guy gets shot and then what . . . continue the story from there till you have a definite conclusion.
Overall, it's a well animated piece and I enjoyed it, but it just needs a little more to be great. Keep up the good work!
Excellent ! Wouldnt think its your first animation
Hey man , excellent flash there ! Good story and everything just fits perfectly into place . I love it !