Hmm...
It's good but i'm kinda questioning if it counts as a flash...
I'll still rate it as if it was a regular flash though, so dont worry o.o
Reviews for "The Black Sword"
megadudu responds:
hahahaha thanks the preloader menu and the credits wer the only things i made that wer in flash
Alright
The animation was pretty decent and the voice acting was tolerable so it was pretty good in my opinion
12/02/2020
I saw a notification that you reacted to my review (haven't been on Newgrounds in years) and it's been so long that I don't remember seeing this or writing this review.
Looking at this with a fresh perspective, this is really charming. I love the quality of the old camera, I love the stilted movements of the claymation and the novice voice-over. Maybe it's nostalgia for the old days of internet animations? Either way I love this and hope you've been well. I'm going to go and see if you've made anything else in the past 9 years.
Gave you a five because....
...number one- there aren't enough people doing these
number two-the arrogance of another reviewer who will not be named
Good job man.
megadudu responds:
thanks man means alot to me
not bad
Pretty promising. I think as you work with it more your camera work will be more consistent. Some of the frames / shots were messy. Also maybe not speaking so close to the mic or saving it at a more quality bitrate would help.
nice
this is a good clay animation but like you said the VA is not the best try to use more range in your voices moving your voice box up or down in your throat cause the pitch to go up or down like a trombone. work on changing pitch and altering voices away from your natural one. or watch some you tube videos on it. but the clay animation was good camera didnt move to much but take more pictures with shorter movements and a high frame rate to make the motions more smooth. also use different angles so we can get into the characters lifes.
But not to bad nice effort
megadudu responds:
yes the main problem is that my voice cracks pretty bad in this claymation im gonna try harder and do the voices better next time