I thought...
this was great... I used to watch your stuff back in the day and it's good to see some more. I had a feeling that once he passed the fat pig that he was going to have girlfriend problems. I also loved how the animation turned into a game all of the sudden which was kool. Plus I thought the drug scene was funny. Your stuff is always good, keep it up.
Animated Excellence!
Vinnie, it's been a while since you submitted Gravitaxis, and you finally made a cartoon with a notable plot. Ok, your previous stuff had stories as well, but not as meaty or developed as this. Plus, that interactive part was a first coming from you, and I know a few programmers you may want to check out. Aside from that...
In terms of art and animation; it's still the same style that you're synonymous with, but I really like that part where Renegade Dog and Astromiau were realistically drawn; which was a nice touch. However, seeing that your artwork has been influenced by anime, you might end up pissing off anime haters such as Oney, the Edible Castle guys, TFX, Doug Sauncy, Hans Van Harken, and MCSM Studios. On the other hand, you animated those characters superbly, so who are those guys to complain? When it came to the sound, you have made good use of Audio Portal songs, along with 4mat's chip tunes. Plus, the voice work is excellent, unlike Arrogancy, Tyler Gibb, and a few others who won't be named. As for the content, while it started out a bit dry, it was hilarious when AM started holding his breath in the elevator and managed to stay funny. In addition, your direction skills are also praiseworthy, though not everybody will like this.
What I do like:
-Great art and animation
-Funny
-Good pace
-Well-written
-Original, even though that still takes a backseat to the execution.
-Nice use of gradients
What I don't like:
-Not everyone will like either the artstyle or the premise.
-Huge Filesize
-The interactive part, while well done, may or may not affect the pace.
Overall: How would you like a ten out of ten for this, Vinnie?
Brilliant.
This kind of quality work is rare and far between. You animate very well, you tell a good story (though this is more of a prologue) and you manage to do it with quite efficient humor. I think you've got a future in writing if you keep honing your skills.
I've only seen this kind of quality in greats such as Adam Phillips and Dave.
Looking forward to the next installment.
oho woooooow!!!
Súper padre! linda historia! me encantan los gatos asi q simplemente ME FASCINO! esta super chido! felicidades!
Bien hecho Vinnie!
Como todos dicen: "Ya hacia tiempo que no subias una nueva animacion". Esto anterior es muy cierto, pero se ve que agregaste dedicacion a este flash. Veo que tus animaciones van mejorando con el tiempo y en verdad me encanto ya que este es la primera animacion que presentas con personajes que tienen voz o al menos eso creo.
Las voces y el lenguaje de estos personajes se me hizo chistoso y divertido. Buen manejo con el efecto de las voces. Mas, creo que podrian mejorar la calidad de audio de estas. Ame tambien la interaccion que tiene este flash. Que no se diga nada mas, tu humor es unico. (:
En Resumen, estoy complacido que estes devuelta a hacer flash y espero ver las siguientes. Te doy 5/5 y 9/10.