Reviews for U: First Thing Game

[SamGreen]

Damn!! :(

SO MUCH POTENTIAL!!! The greatest and most powerful tool in animation is your timing. The 'back flip kick' was totally unnecessary, more so there was no sound or emotion. That was you main punch line so next time something like that happens do this:

"Justin Beiber"
*guy gets immediate angry face* half a second later punches the friend*
*Dragon Ball Z power sound* or something

Of coarse this is only a suggestion. You're going to have to make up your own god damn mind if you're going to accept what I have to tell you or not. :)

Good luck in future productions man!

Blakant responds:

thanks for the good suggestion, we'll try to dig out more idea & execution it much btter next time :D

[jonnyRYhollywood]

Simple.

Funny voices. Simple Ending. Usually shorts have a big joke at the end.

Blakant responds:

yeah, we need bigger scriptwriter then xD

[KingAcez]

hmm...

ok...but... i don't think it's that great of material!

Blakant responds:

maybe bcuz i made em, im not a great guy, juz a guy trying to learn in the procsss. thanks!

[AinigmA]

i was waiting

seriously i was... (for sth funny :S)

i'm sorry

Blakant responds:

u r forgiven, dunno wat sth mean btw.. :P

[sinfulwolf]

Anti-climatic

It had potential, and the artwork and animation were both really good. However the punchline was rather... lacking.

Perhaps make it more clear in the end that the one character is upset, or angry or whatever, and have the kick a little more impactful. A bigger sound, a scream of agony from the abusee. Something just to make it really stand out and pop. As it is, it just kind of goes on without drawing much attention to itself.

The rest of it was pretty good though.

Blakant responds:

most ppl commented on the punch, guess i rlly haf to work hard on em next time.. :)