Woo Hoo!!
Thanks for sorting out the Playing problem. I can now click play all and that's exactly what it'll do :) It turns out I missed some parts. :P
Aside from the generic hard man voice that Yoro has, I believe that this has THE best Voice acting in an animation. Seriously, there's such a variety of voices in this. Vance and Xhast happen to be my favourite so don't go changing them :) The Enigmatic Voice is a brilliant little touch. TBH I haven't got a shit of an idea of what he's talking about but he's awesome nonetheless ^^
I'm sure someone said this before but I'll say it again :P The radio parts at the beginning were a little too OTT. I could barely make out what they were saying without the aid of the subtitles and if I turned it up all I got was a nasty SSSHHH sound :/ You might wanna work on that next time round. All so you shouldv'e put gun fire in the background, we will be able to set up a better picture in our minds that they are actually fighting something.
Erm..the running part, where the soldier are going to the evac point, was a little off. I mean, it could have just been my pc/internet or it was just generally jumpy and I could easily tell it was looped. (And I know jack shit about animating)
The execution of the story is obviously slow, which is a good thing I suppose but the whole scene cut thing was a bit annoying at times. It just seemed to cut to a new scene too often and I couldn't really get into a scene. It might be an idea to lengthen the scenes in the next one. Also the Enigmatic voice scenes need a little shortening. And by that I mean at the end. There were a couple of times I thought that the part had finished and so I missed out on seeing Shen and Nicco at the end. :(
The flash back thing needed a little more...exposure? Like, I think there need to be a clear cut scene of what Xhast and Yoro were doing instead of just showing little bits then fading back into the speech between them. The gun fire part was a bit weird with the bullet travelling diagonally up, instead of straight past his head. Also, where he cocks the gun in the 'Preparation' scene it seems to flash and disappear as he cocks it. Don't know if it happened for anyone else, could just be me :P
That made up design that was on, like, everything. Is that some sort of Egg?
I know that you've got a line from the Matrix Reloaded in there:
"Take a seat"
"I'll stand thanks"
"Fine, suit yourself"
:P Pow! You can't get anything past me if it's from the Matrix. I watch the trilogy at least 10 times a year ^^
One last problem ;) I was credited for VAing? I don't think you used the voice I did for the Veteran, unless you somehow edited it. But I don't think that's the case O.o
Finally, YAY! I'm in the Thanks list ^^ Woo Hoo!! However, Ima still give it a 9/10. It wasn't perfect but it wasn't the absolute worst thing in the world, and it's pretty damn good for a first major animation :D
