i have a qeustion are making 4-b????
Reviews for "Madness Latino 4-A"
Unigodspawn responds:
yeup, slow by the moment but it's on progress... ;)
not back of a story line
when will part b come out and its a pretty good series over all
debes mejorar
mira creo que tienes talento y habilidad pero no sabe aprovecharlas, e visto tu otras animaciones y creo que este es la mejor pero no impresionante ni satisfactoria, ponle mas paciencia.
1) usa mejor las interpolaciones de movimiento y tambien de forma para dar un toque a tu flash, combina interpolacion con fotograma por fotograma y con mucha, mucha paciencia
2) busca musicas mas entretenidas o mas, por ver tus animaciones creoque te gusta el metal y el rock, un buen toque para tus animaciones en pelea asi que antes de crear tu animacion busca musica y ahi creAte una idea
3) no seas tan plagueo, no utilizes artes de otros como krinkels como hank y sus armas,, creas tus propias armas y personajes como los enemigos de nick
4) sobre tu problema del ingles es muy mal redactado, te recomiendo que en la pelicula flash pongas un rectangulo negro abajo y ahi pon todo el dialogo o tal vez te contactes con otras personas y pongas voces a tu animacio y te dire que te pondre un 10 y te va ir mucho mejors
y lo ultimo
6) dibujas mas las caras de los personajes yo veo que nick y monica solo le dibujaste solo 1 y trata de que mira por otro lado con la interpoelacion de movimento y se ve mal, ibuja como se veria en frente y por detras te ayudara mucho
ojala que tomes ento en buena y no en mala , ojala que madness latino B SEA MUCHO MEJOR Y QUE HAGAS HECHO CASO DE LO QUE TE DIJE Y UNA COSA MADNESS ES PELES Y SANGRE, COMBIANA PELEA CON CONVERSACIONES COMO HISISTE AQUI
Unigodspawn responds:
ojala mas comentarios que le dan a mis animaciones fueran como este (Y) muchas gracias la verdad, y realmente si tienes razón con respecto a todo lo que dijiste, trataré para el ML4-B enmendar tantos errores, el hecho de que este capitulo fuera tanto "blah blah blah" era mas como para empezar a darle cierta historia concreta a Madness Latino, aún estoy trabajando el storyboard de ML4-B, y espero que sea mejor, de verdad, creo que este sería el mejor comentario que me le han dado a la animación xD
de nuevo muchas gracias! realmente lo aprecio :D
hmmm
I do believe that this is one of the best works I've seen all week. The character design is ingenious and the plot is very well put together, and the weapons used in this are well put together. Did you use the a second layer for the weapons?
No, honestly.
I don't really know how to start this, but this was the worst tribute I've ever seen in my entire life. Is this serious? Also, what's with the stupid name? 'Latino.' Sounds like it's directed towards mexicans etc. While watching this I had a few questions:
1. What the fuck is wrong with his headwrap?
2. Are you serious?
3. What's with all this shitty talking in EXTREMELY poor english?
4. Why this unfitting song? This song is probably meant for action, not random-ass talk scenes.
5. Why was she glowing red?
6. Why these cheap fantasy style weapons? They look poor.
7. What does 'FOGERT' mean?
8. Why did you rip off the original madness character?
The artwork was horrible. The concept was... even worse.
If you want to make a good madness flash, do the following:
Make your own style.
Make it original, not just like the other 293067 shitty tributes we see in the flash portal. (Like the collabs with random kills from random people.)
Don't make it boring, make it interesting and don't just drag it out to 4 minutes of talking.
Also, I don't see why this got such a good score. Probably becuase the ones reviewing it are your freinds and they don't have the balls to give you their honest opinion.
Go improve, and then comeback once you've gotten an HONEST review by HONEST PEOPLE. Not your friends.
I'm done.
Unigodspawn responds:
then... if i'm from latinoamerica that means i'm a mexican? that's a bit racist, and i'm agree with all that you said, sadly is true... excuse me if i couldn't do a good job... i'll try to work harder for the next time.
besides, mostly part of the reviews are not my friends, actually i don't even know the 70% or 80% of the people who has reviewed this flash... and it doesn't matter... i don't judge them if they like this flash or not... i'm glad when somebody like this flash and leave a good comment...
but the reason why i'm still uploading flash here on newgrounds are for reviews like yours...
...thanks a lot man :)