I gave this submission a vote of "3"
A good try. But the sprite animation was waaay too choppy. You did not work with the sprite axis very well and some sprites were missing. The only good thing about this flash was the choice of music. I LOVED the first tune when Wolverine and RYu fought on the roof.
wow, love the first song ;P
nice choice of music, you choose the best songs i ever heard!!! ;) haha
no... i am seriously going to review this flash... (my music is still not that great anyway, i still have long way to go)
first of all im happy to see that your the first on newgrounds who used any of my songs in there flashes (and credited me so that i can find it myself)... but the use of it could be a lot better
my song compared with the song after it has no velocity at all, for 50% my own fault, still need to fix that... but you choose the song yourself for that specific flash so you should have decided to increase it yourself (or lower the other)
another problem is that my music doesnt stop... the volume is low so it doesnt get noticed easily, but my song still plays while the second one has already started... its also a way to sudden change
love the second song, nemenistheory has some great songs and you choose quite a fitting one from her
only one more thing on the music... you did gave me credits on the flash page, but not inside the flash itself... im really happy that you gave credits at all, but it would have been nice if you also gave me credits in the flash itself like you did with nemenistheory
the flash it self is nothing special...
first of all its a sprite movie, so not much from you on the characters and background
the conversation could use voice actors
and the whole flash needs a story
the first few seconds of the flash (the part where my song plays) is something where nothing happens and what does happen in it doesnt go smooth
the camera movements are a good thing only they could also use a lot more work
i know this is only a preview, so its nothing more then logical that you still have to work on it... but even as a preview it needs to have more structure
i know its quite a list that you have to work on, but with attention and time anyone can make something nice eventually
sorry that i dont have much good things to say, but i always try to be honest on the hope my opinion and ideas might help you to get better
i wish you a lot of fun and good luck, hopefully this review is useful to you...
Musical Memoirs
for the last time its a preview!!!!!!!!!
could use some work
I mean, its just sprites and sound, not too hard. Put in a proper Hadoken for ryu, maybe some better animation on the fire, put some cleaner looking credits in, and voice act dont just use text, it makes the movie look really gay
I like it
It was a little jumpy at certain points and somewhat off but it's just a preview and I look forward to seeing the finished project!
Error: Previews=Doing it Wrong
A: You don't make Preview Flashes.
B: All this is is a bunch of game sprites + sound effects. Not much effort.
C: Please stop talking in caps. It makes me feel like I am being yelled at.