Pretty good.
However, getting to the fight scene is a bit tedious, so I recommend adding a scene selection of some sort.
Other than that, pretty good
Reviews for "Megaman Black"
jutopa responds:
thanks, i'll do it.
Nice... But
Poorly translated. I'm guessing Spanish... "The Dr. Wily", "Did he said"... Enough to throw a guy off the overall plot. so... Knocking off 3 points. Otherwise, animation is great. Loved the fight scene.
Better than some of the other awful stuff today
Jewel in the rough today... at least I can at least watch it.
Overall, an enjoyable movie
First of all, I agree with some of the things mentioned in previous reviews. The grammar is sufficient to tell the story, but it could stand to be polished by a native English speaker. The punctuation needs to be anglicized as well; English speaking countries don't use inverted punctuation at the beginning of a sentence. It would also help the flow of the movie to remove the space bar as a trigger to advance the story. Just have it advance automatically. The music selection was outstanding, which made the periods of silence seem quite incongruous by comparison. I suggest filling in the silence with a passive music clip, ilke maybe a simple drum beat in the background during dialogue.
Now that all that is out of the way, I have to say I enjoyed this movie. The introduction included bits and pieces from multiple Mega Man series', such as the 8-bit X series sprites along with the 8-bit original series sprites, 8-bit remixes of Battle Network music, and so on. Although a bit confusing at first, it did grow on me. Also of note, this wasn't what I'd call a "pure" sprite movie. It told the story through use of sprites, but included non-sprite effects (such as stretching and squashing a sprite to simulate an out-of-breath Mega Man). I personally prefer the sprite itself to be animated (by way of editing the sprite frame by frame) to produce these effects, instead of drawing the effects in over the sprite. But that's just personal preference, so I won't hold it against you.
The bottom line is simple: I look forward to the continuation of this story, and I will watch it if and when you publish it. I'd say that makes this project a success on your part. Nicely done!
Great animation, two major flaws
I've always been a fan of sprite movies, and this one did not let me down. The animation is perfect.
However, there are two major flaws that I hope you will fix in your future releases of this series.
First, and the most obvious, is the grammar. It's pretty apparent English is not your first language. That's not the problem; but if you're going to release a movie in English, it is very important that the grammar is correct. I would advise finding a friend who's first language is English to proof read your script.
My second gripe, which is very minor, is having to press space to advance the story. I don't see the point to this at all, especially considering the lines aren't very long at all. Just make the story progress automatically.
Other than those points, I loved the movie and look forward to the rest of the series!
jutopa responds:
thanks for the help.
yes, im not english, im spanish.