In a few hours
hey man that wasn't bad I really enjoyed that good job and what gets me is, is that you throw that together in a few hours wow how you manage to create all that in a few hours must mean you got some talent with flash.
Reviews for "Gotham Heat Trailer"
This looks like it's gonna be awesome.
It's works of art like these that make Newgrounds worth staying a part of despite spammers like KittyKrew. I look forward with much enthusiastic anticipation to the finished project.
P.S. I completely understand why you needed to post this; stagnation drives me insane too.
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Pretty fucking awesome.
The only thing that bothered me was that you made the eyes behind the shields of the cops very bright, it would look alot more creepy if you'd just draw black shields with some light reflections, but yackydiyack, this is gonny be awesome.
Very excited about your potential!
This is one of the few submissions that I even bother to write a review for.
I see a lot of potential in this work--the general direction of the piece has really good concepts behind it and your hard work and perseverance are apparent.
Things to improve are the performance/acting in both the animation and the voice over. It seems a bit infantile but can definitely get better.
The directing and the imagery are where the potentials are but are not quite there yet. One quick suggestion is to not make so much happen at the same time--it may seem cool but really just subtracts from what's left of your dramatic action.
After all, it is a trailer. I understand the compulsion for the flashiness, but you should make things juxtapose to form a purpose. I know this may sound a bit ambiguous, but it is the best I can do for now.
I am definitely excited to see more of your work! Perhaps, the full feature next time? : ))
MOC-Productions responds:
I appreciate the constructive criticism. Truth is I threw this together in like an hour or so. Not something I typically do, nor am I proud of. Just wanted to show some new footage. I'm doing everything I can to make the full feature coherent and well paced. These trailers are just to keep me from going insane by having SOMETHING to present before the finished product. Again, thank you for the constructive criticism. I'll take it into consideration.
I must say
It looks very promising.