Good, but...
... the visual style borrows heavily, and I do mean heavily, from the Castle series. This almost to the point it feels like plagiarism. You're probably aware of this, but it is the main reason I'm keeping the score from the top of the scale, so I thought I should comment on it.
The voice acting and camera work for the first few scenes were awesome, I feel maybe you should have kept doing that instead of the violence.