Okay...
I mean, I can understand that you spent a lot of time on the animation, but... The animation was choppy and all over the place, I know that frame by frame is difficult, but I just don't understand why people are thinking this animation is amazing, I dont think it deserves all the 10's and 9's that people are handing out.
The story was kind of boring, and confusing. You should probably think out the story a little bit more next time you are making an animation.
All in all it seemed like you didn't take much time on the character animation, and the backgrounds. It seemed like it was a rough draft.
5/10
3/5
By the way, people are mostly going to mark this useless because I'm giving out actual advice instead of just being like everyone else and saying something stupid.