bad
This is probably the most un original, horribly voice acted, badly synced, and unfunny garbage on newgrounds you can find for the year.
I can tell that you didn't have a plot in mind when you started, maybe to just see how it took you. Obviously that was an awful idea. I have that sometimes, and then i actually come up with an idea.
Your charecters are extremely generic and its just one step up from doing stickmen, at least your done copying eddsworld but seriously.
And honestly, do we seriously need subtitles? Is your dialouge too "advanced" for us? Stuff that a 12 year old would write? You cant be 14, IM 14 and i can think up something more original and smarter.
You definetlely have potential, this flash will be something you will look back at, laugh, and say ""Wow this one was just a pile of shit"