The only suggestions I have.
Are that you have a pilot with some kind of breifing at the beginning. A sprite guy would be cool with that retro sprite talk sound. He breifs us, then we see the ship from a rear view right? The camera pans above him and he goes to some kind of warp and shit. There's battles during the flight, hits warp, more battles, then he reaches his destination where the camera pans back down behind his ship. He makes some commentary about how his journey isn't over and we see some kind of giant monster hovering above a planet that he has to go fight. The camera stays put as we watch him fly towards the behemoth toward some kind of glory, then cut. We don't watch him defeat the monster, but it can be insinuated that he was victorious by creating a sequel!!
I love the idea you got goin' here, just needs some tweaking!!