Well...
The poem Itself I suppose was good I'm not a poet so I wouldnt know, but It just doesnt match when you put it in flash, because there was really no purpose to it, there are other websites that you can post up your poem and that would be the place to do it not here good job though
Poem reminds me of Peon and Warcraft 3 rules so I'll give you your 5 points.
Good
It was good but EVERYTHING HAS A FUCKEN SOUND TO IT IF YOU KNEW HOW TO LISTEN YOU WOULD KNOW THAT SHIT YOU STUPID FUCKERS.
sucks
This flash is a piece of junk you freak. You should stop programing java and go back to your little shadow in the corner of your room and cry to your self. You Freak!
Boring
Only watch this if you like to stick your penis in assholes... If so, be my guest and watch this gay piece of shit.