Honestly, what are YOU trying to get out of this song. I can definitely tell the different times of the week you decided to pick this song up and off again. It is not thorough. It's all good, but it's as if the puzzle peices do not fit together right. The temperment and mood swings of this song, and perhaps even a bit of the tempo, alternates throughout the song. I get what you are trying to do, like a rock n' roll album, "soft music before the the harder songs so they sound better" kind of rthym; But it is not working here.
Better luck next time, Your populous loves it. but they will forget about it after a few listens. Trust me, break it up in to seperate music, and into an album if you are that dedicated.