Wow... I'm dead. This was bloody hilarious. DiVoTion had me with a few great lines - "You don't have a fucking clue how big my palm is" was pretty damn genius, but on schemes, bars and flow I think it's got to be Jar.
DiVoTion just needs to keep at it, get better with practice. Jar for the advance though.
My vote's for Jar. I know I'm one to talk, but DiVoTion was quite hard to understand for a good part of his verses, I think the weird mixing as well added towards that so some of his lyrics got pretty smothered by the beat at times. Jar had a nice flow, quality, punches and didn't talk about his opponents dick on multiple occasions... still, for a first time battling, and recently starting rapping, DiVoTion did all right, just work on the mixing/enunciation, practice a bunch and avoid talking about dicks as much.
Jar Jar Binks for the win
Jar takes it easily, this one doesn't need a review.
Jar had somewhere to go apparently cause he finished this from the beginning.